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pleasure principle
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 08:58:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see my folly, now.
I misunderstood
your interpretation
of pleasure. . .
of bliss. . .
catch me
as I'm falling
too swiftly
towards reality.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-03-29 08:58:13]
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Re: pleasure principle
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by venkat on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 09:22:34 AM AEST
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My dear friend, this fall looks like a blessing in disguise since you feel you have realized its reality..
o.k. don't be serious on my comment..
I feel your emotion is nicely expressed in this short poem:-) venkat |
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Re: pleasure principle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 07:48:02 AM AEST
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short and sweet i thought.
-phil |
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Re: pleasure principle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:47:00 AM AEST
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*sigh*
Sounds as though someone lied and someone caught on. It certainly seems deep to me. I guess better reality than living in a fantasy, huh. |
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