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delicious ache
Contributed by
n2dep2care
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Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 05:49:32 AM in AEST
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Last night I dreamed of you. My body remembers your touch and a dull delicious ache vibrates through and within.
I replay the softness spoken into my ear and I hear your tones playing songs of heat and passion in my heart.
My mind is stuck in the ecstasy of joy, and I blush remembering you.
My body calls, my heart shouts, my soul craves and I want-you-here to calm my desire. Where are you, where are your hands exploring me, your tongue tasting and bringing surges of tingle and gentle giggles? Where is the sweet scent that floods my regions and unexplored terrains? I am charged and ready to explode at even the suggestion of you.
Last night I dreamed of you- and now, I wait- impatiently.
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Re: delicious ache
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 06:57:11 AM AEST
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Beautifull, classy, senenus write.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: delicious ache
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by elle on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 08:35:54 AM AEST
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| deliciously sensual. . . whheeewwww. . . elle |
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Re: delicious ache
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 12:01:55 PM AEST
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| Well done, indeed... I do hope you shan't be kept waiting at any great length. |
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Re: delicious ache
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 07:54:51 AM AEST
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this is fantastic. normally i prefer short, snappy writing, but this was world class. yes, that's right, WORLD CLASS. the description was stunning, and it was written in such a beautiful, honest way. you have an incredible amount of talent. 5/5. i would give you 10 if i could.
-Phil |
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Re: delicious ache
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by althea_kendry on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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i know these feelings exactly hehehe
hopefully you aren't left waiting impatiently for too long, i know how much that can suck
good luck |
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