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kisses
Contributed by
TFLM
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I still think about you
Those wiggly toes
and funny knees
They made you laugh when lightly brushed
You called them butterfly kisses
The flickering feeling
when
Close enough, a blinking eyelash
Swept across that freckled skin
Your photos of
this
,and that
The teddy in the phonebooth
They're gone now
Not that it matters
Hardly a memory
I use a mobile these days
I'm glad
You're gone
I'm different now
So stern and serious
You wouldn't recognise me
Not even in the dark
I wish I had seen
That troubled mind
Not so different from my own
Though I would never admit it.
Copyright ©
TFLM
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2003-03-25 11:35:00]
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Re: kisses
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 01:38:52 PM AEST
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interesting write
Sharon |
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Re: kisses
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 06:52:45 AM AEST
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| I love deep poems .. and this is great! Good write ... Jan |
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Re: kisses
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:12:51 PM AEST
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| beautiful expression of those memories that can mean so much, i like the deeper level to it and the way theres a darker undertone. hope to read more of your work. Kate. |
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Re: kisses
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 12:22:16 PM AEST
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| Some very gentle brush strokes make a lovely picture. |
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