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Moons of Jupiter
Contributed by
dissolvedlines
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Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 08:51:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I swallow the silver moons of Jupiter
That slide down your smooth silent skin
And I lick each of the delicious moons
Into my heart and dreams
You awaken me to another dimension
And blow my mind like a supernova
The silvery stuff of Jupiter dreams
Slides down into my heart and lungs
Your heart beats and the universe shakes
And your eyes dissolve my conscious wake
You mesmerize me into disbelief
For tonight I believe I can transcend
I’ll swim into a parallel universe with you
And we shall dance that endless dance
Dance until the universe decides to die
And then we’ll jump to another universe in time
When the stars have all gone to sleep
And the moons whisper their last dream
I will come to you through all time and space
To hold you deep in my loving arms.
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Re: Moons of Jupiter
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 09:38:01 PM AEST
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"When the stars have all gone to sleep
And the moons whisper their last dream
I will come to you through all time and space
To hold you deep in my loving arms."
Sighhhhhhhhh.......... how romantic!! I love this...
Great write...
Jenni
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Re: Moons of Jupiter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th March 2009 @ 02:49:30 PM AEST
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My goodness! How divine!! There is a sensual nature within your words that so
delicately arouses all the senses. Moons of Jupiter ... my GOD! How beautiful.
Each verse is a testament to the beauty that surrounds hearts in the deep
throws of passion. This drove right through me. Exquisite poetry, friend.
~ Breezy
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Re: Moons of Jupiter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th March 2009 @ 03:17:14 PM AEST
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great imagery, great metaphor, great passion, great poetry!
-phil |
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Re: Moons of Jupiter
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by bizboicera on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 04:52:43 PM AEST
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| Very deep. It's love in a way I have never heard before, and those kind are the best...love it |
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