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so untrue

Contributed by McDurry on Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 10:57:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i thought i found love again ... You made me feel safe.
Every time i heard your voice or felt Your touch my tummy would turn, i would smile and laugh.
Every moment with u i cherished and wished it would never end.
You were my knight in shining armer, my protecter.
You made me feel as if nothing else materd.
As i turnd the corner thinkin about how lucky i was, i saw u with her.
Out of all the ways i thought u could make me feel it never came to mind u could make me feel like i do now.
Unloved, not importent, Worthless.
How could u be so untrue?
Why did u do this to me?
What did i do to deserve this?
What has she got that i dont?
Does she know about us?
Were you going to tell me about her or just leave me living this lie?!?!?!?!
All these questions ran threw my head.
I thought u were different but it looks like every guy no matter how nice they seem are all alike.
They think about themselves and themselves ONLY.
They dont give a two rats arse about how they make anyone else feel.
As long as they get what they wanted there happy.
They dont care about whos feelings and life they step on and shatter to get it.
All the things you said to me the " I love you and always will", "I will do anything to make u happy", "Your my world and you mean everything to me".
Was that all a lie?
Was everything u ever said or ever done all a lie?
I just dont get how you can be so untrue.
I thank god for showing me who u really are.
Now im moving on with my life.
forgeting about you and all of this mess you have coresed in my life.
And i also thank god ur no longer in it!

Copyright © McDurry ... [ 2009-03-27 10:57:44]
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