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From The Heart
Contributed by
BOZEEN
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Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 10:19:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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LOVE IS A VERY WONDERFUL FEELING AND THOSE WHO ARE BLESSED TO RECEIVE IT ONCE, ARE EXTREMELY BLESSED WHEN WE RECEIVE IT IN OUR LIVES TWICE,BECAUSE NOTHING IS MORE REWARDING IN LIFE THAN KNOWING YOU HAVE SOMEONE WHO NOT ONLY BRINGS OUT YOUR BEST,BUT ENHANCES IT AS WELL,IT IS EASY TO SAY THE WORDS BUT THE EXPRESSION FAR OUT WEIGHS ALL OF THAT,WE FAIL TO REALIZE THAT SOMETIMES WE CAN MAKE OR BREAK THAT VERY LOVE BY NOT FEEDING TO THE HEARTS OF THOSE WE LOVE.
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BOZEEN
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2009-03-27 10:19:18]
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Re: From The Heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 10:22:54 AM AEST
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I liked the content of the write and what you were saying here.
One thing I always have a hard time with is this type of format and the huge shouting caps .
Maybe try a different style and lose the shout, to me it would read softer like a whisper ya know?
Good work
Michelle |
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Re: From The Heart
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by BlueTheWolf on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 10:51:15 AM AEST
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| I agree with Shelby, it feels...angry o.O But good words. |
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