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Contributed by
hopelezz
on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 01:07:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Trapped in the cage,
can't go outside
Bursting down my rage,
until it's tide.
Doors are locked
windows are closed.
Alone in my room,
Felt over-dosed.
I wish to run outside,
and feel all glad.
No sadness shows,
and vanish all bad.
But now, cage are open,
doors and windows unlock
To be happy is only the key,
so jump outside and feel free.
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hopelezz
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2009-03-27 01:07:42]
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Re: Free
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by redwest802 on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 04:46:21 AM AEST
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| good write, keep on writting i like your work |
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Re: Free
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by elle on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 06:00:02 AM AEST
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sadness is a cage, in deed, a nasty little trap. but what a joy to see past it & finally to
feel free. wonderful. . . inspiring write. peace. elle |
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Re: Free
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by BlueTheWolf on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:01:16 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this, if only I had the courage to jump outside and be free. :l Good poem. |
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