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You put holes in my happiness
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 11:26:39 PM in AEST
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You’re the one that caused all the stress
You’re the reason why I'm such a mess
I've gone insane
All because you play your little games
You could have let it be
But no you saw weakness so you brought me to my knee
You have to exploit it all
Until your adversary takes the fall
You caused all this
I to can play your games
Before it's over you’re going to be insane
Can you live through that madness?
I just want you to know you started this
I just want you to know you put holes in my happiness
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Re: You put holes in my happiness
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by hopelezz on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 01:09:39 AM AEST
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wow nice poem... something related to me...
-HoPeLezZ ZereNi†y |
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Re: You put holes in my happiness
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by elle on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 07:56:44 AM AEST
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| adversary, you are my lesson. good job. peace. elle |
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Re: You put holes in my happiness
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by BlueTheWolf on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:08:45 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this. Good read. |
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Re: You put holes in my happiness
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by freckle on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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First of all, let me say, I absolutely LOVE the title of this poem. Unique, clever, original...just an amazing title.
And the poem itself, oh yes, I have known people like those you speak of. Very good write.
I really liked this poem.
Thanks for sharing,
Carol |
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