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crow
Contributed by
polaris773
on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 02:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Oh come crow have a seat next to me
Let’s talk about the cloudy sky
And how the light still shines on us
Crow say you can see me
So I know im not alone
Stop staring at me crow
You have my attention
Now tell me about the misery
You’ve bought to the people before me
Now you just stare but at least I have company
Just stand there and look through me
When I can feel you standing on me
And now Im here just wondering if
Im even here with you or you with me
Crow take me with you when you fly away
Bring me to a place where shade rules
And I can stay and sleep for days
Waiting for you to bring more company
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polaris773
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2009-03-26 14:33:57]
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Re: crow
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by shelby on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:32:51 PM AEST
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I liked this I could see you sitting there with that crow.
I have had two crows tagging me for several weeks now I talk to them too lol.
Good write
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Re: crow
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by ming on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:11:56 PM AEST
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I LOVE crows...and a poem that had me watching you and the crow have a chat is a good one! This line;
"Oh come crow have a seat next to me
Let’s talk about the cloudy sky
And how the light still shines on us
Crow say you can see me
So I know im not alone"
pulled me in.
ming
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