|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
a lovers' silent prayer
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 09:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
forsake words as a weapon. . .
no 'morrow slain by absences.
forget, before our last dawn breaks. . .
the good-bye kiss.
let us pass the night,
only dwell within each others eyes.
& if a notion tries to slip
between your lips or mine
we'll counter with
delicate finger-tip
placed there as compassion
to shhiiissshhh
our harrowed hearts.
forget time, as a champion. . .
any instance or forever,
never ours to hold
& fails to pacify
for what just falls away.
but keep my gaze & trust so pure. . .
that, nothing can replace.
neglect, with care. . .
the distancing,
the gradual pacing of time
no longer spent.
but keep this truce. . .
a lovers' silent prayer.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-03-26 09:46:40]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: a lovers' silent prayer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 02:03:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is lovely. I always like your stuff. Great write.
Dan |
|
|
Re: a lovers' silent prayer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:16:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good writing once again. a joy to read.
-phil |
|
|
Re: a lovers' silent prayer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:32:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It does have something of a hypnotic quality about this piece, certainly that's how it felt when I read it
Nice write
Steve |
|
|
Re: a lovers' silent prayer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:17:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This was a very lyrical, almost musical piece. It just flowed so beautifully that it was a total joy to read. Fantastic work.
Be well,
~Loende |
|
|
Re: a lovers' silent prayer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 06:35:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
stay quiet, forget the time, and just enjoy the moment ... a grand message for experiencing love and good poetry.
nice one, elle (the move doesn't appear to have dulled the senses).
Spike |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
