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I am not that. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:09:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am not that. . .
your discontent
your crystal ball
all shards & glint.
the rain upon
your neck & brow
a clearer day,
we lost, somehow.
our words, aflame
with tragic blow.
loves' fire, asunder
no spark or glow.
though time is short
we wade too far
& each abyss
does challenge our
tenderness
& highest thought
until we twine
& twine, we naught.
until the stars
that shine are crossed.
I am that. . .
sweet love you lost. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-03-26 06:09:20]
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Re: I am not that. . .
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:54:42 AM AEST
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Like a walk across the tight-rope. A straight distinct path from one point to the other. I like this very much Elle.
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Re: I am not that. . .
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:14:19 PM AEST
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i love your style, it flows wonderfully, keep up the good work!
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