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A Courteousy Too Few
Contributed by
odessa19
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Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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There are no misunderstandings to be drawn from my heart.
I am driving towards my purpose, re-awakening my conscious heart.
My conscience comes back to life.
At times, I dream of one to love me like I can love.
Mostly, as it happens, they do-- but I struggle with contentment.
I've opened up truly to few- but, I don't.
I have lived un-brazened by your lack of love for so long,
I have seen happiness, utter joy.
I have celebrated my life!
Yet, when you are here, I wish it were here with me.
Alas, it is not what I have... It is what I am that resounds my heart and strengthens my soul beyond the clasping of the feeble.
Copyright ©
odessa19
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2009-03-26 00:25:00]
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Re: A Courteousy Too Few
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 01:02:05 AM AEST
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YOU HAVE YOUR UPS & DOWNS-TWIST & TURNS,
& YOUR LOVE REALLY SOUNDS-LIKE A MIST THAT 4EVER BURNS! AWESOME INNER STRENGTH AS YOU ARE STRONG,GREAT POEM!!!!!
DAN! |
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Re: A Courteousy Too Few
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:35:30 AM AEST
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Hmmmm.. you may have started a debate on whether or not unbrazened is a word. Perhaps without the dash, it is. After all, the dictionary seems to be revised every few years and Alanis Morissette uses this very word in her song, Break. So, I think it's cool and even if its not, I salute you for using it.
Anyway, I like the poem too. It seems to convey a vulnerability for love and a strength to move on without it. Least that's what I get out of it. Interpretations aside, I like it no mater what.
Take care.
Tim
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Re: A Courteousy Too Few
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:22:55 PM AEST
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Perhaps un-brazened will appear in the dictionary at some future date,lol.
What has appeared here is a deep, thoughtful write which I really enjoyed reading.
Good luck with many more
Steve |
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Re: A Courteousy Too Few
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by eternalsunshine on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:48:25 PM AEST
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such wonderful & rich write
enjoyed it dear
thank you |
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