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Loving You in Different Light
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 09:30:56 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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i loved you like the summer
the warm breeze that slithers
and cools you in heat
only to lift your spirit
i loved you like a flower
when no one was around
i loved you in secret
there was no other way around
i loved you like the seasons
repeatedly changing
a little rain, a thunder
a rose wrapped around a thorn
i loved you like a pet
serving endless needs
only to forgive the betrayal
wheeling continuously in need
while cutting through the chains
that bounded me so long
to a love like fairytale
ending in the dark
until the sun that rose, upon the blue sky
lifting the veil from my eyes
loving you endlessly
in a different light ...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2009-03-25 21:30:56]
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Re: Loving You in Different Light
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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Wheww I enjoyed the journey this poem took me on.
i loved you like the seasons
repeatedly changing
a little rain, a thunder
a rose wrapped around a thorn
YES!!!!!!!
Good work here sweets
Hug hug
Michelle
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Re: Loving You in Different Light
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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Very creative, good write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Loving You in Different Light
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by Norb-E on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 12:15:07 AM AEST
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| A great poem indeed. I felt every single word of that. good job. |
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Re: Loving You in Different Light
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by Odessa19 on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 12:29:51 AM AEST
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This must come from someone who truly has a loving heart. It is a gift to see beyond fault and still love but a greater gift to see when loving can best be done free from enclosure.
Well written, thank you. |
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Re: Loving You in Different Light
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 01:13:24 AM AEST
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ALOT OF SPECIAL FEELINGS IN THIS POEM..... BEAUTIFUL!WHAT A HEART,AS WELL AS A GREAT WRITER TOO!
DAN!!!!!!! |
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