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More Ways than One
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 09:56:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I gave you jelly beans, three colours of pink
And when you smiled I began to think
We have become friends’ good ones at that
But there was something hidden under my hat
I never did see it until yesterday
When we were serious instead of in play
That’s when it struck me, reality set
You’ve been a part of me since the day we met
Now that I know you a little bit more
I am hoping there is something else in store
I don’t know myself exactly how I feel
But I know this feeling is very much real
I want to find you and to use my heart
In hind I have felt like this from the start
You are so beautiful in more ways than one
If I make you happy then my day feels done
I feel no future when you are not near
I want to protect you and call you dear
I hope to see you happy in all that I do
And to explore a future with just me and you
Wednesday, 25 March 2009
11:08:48 PM
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Re: More Ways than One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 03:07:28 PM AEST
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this is great poetry. so touching and profound. great work.
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Re: More Ways than One
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:29:55 PM AEST
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Wow.. a gal can really go for this...Beautifully written.
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Re: More Ways than One
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 07:06:32 AM AEST
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Great piece. Keep them coming.
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Re: More Ways than One
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Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:27:55 AM AEST
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| very rhythmic and pleasant to read, well done. |
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