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early morning
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I awake to a blank
screaming. . .
empty yourself.
every blossom becomes
my alarm.
alarming silence.
my nerves
so raw with expectation.
tension, envious
of my circumstance. . .
I crawl under
overwhelming comfort.
crisp, linen shelter. . .
comforting.
eternal dreamer.
basket of dreams.
share me, mine
as I succumb. . .
& revisit
for now, I am without.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-03-25 08:38:43]
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Re: early morning
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by leopardpie on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:45:31 AM AEST
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| sounds like you had a bad hangover when awoke with blossoms being your alarms. good poem |
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Re: early morning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:46:38 AM AEST
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Absolutely with the honesty, I am not always quite sure what you're writing about but no matter what, I always enjoy whatever you write because even though I may not fully understand it, I like to think I do by putting all of my multiple interpretations on it. Your mind seems to have a vast wealth of inspiration just dying to jump onto the page.
Very unique!!!
Tim
(who was quite fascinated at all of the meaningsssssssssss I could put into this) |
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Re: early morning
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by elle on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 09:04:14 AM AEST
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In response to your comment, Tim, thank you.
I fancy this about exactly what you mention, the
myriad possibilities of the blank page & our
inspiration derived from where ever, dreams,
circumstances or musings. . . whatever, outside
of our control. The sweetest inkling from beyond.
A friend of mine, the earliest morning when I'm
alone yet not. . . elle |
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Re: early morning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 03:12:11 PM AEST
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yes, there are days when i wish i could just laze in bed all day...a lovely, eloquent write, i enjoyed it very much!
-phil |
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