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Debatable
Contributed by
Spike
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:11:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She said:
Honey, Ah’ am so alone
surrounded, yes, but on my own;
take me to your private place
and speak of things in pairs.
So I rode her long into the night
on wheels and leather and delight,
and set her down in quiet grace
to lay it on the line.
I said:
Baby, there is Yin and Yang
in and out and Sun and Moon;
light and dark and you and me
but different, not the same.
and she said:
Sweetie, here’s the thing
binaries and balance sings;
union means as much to me
as lonely hearts that match.
So I laid her down and loved her long,
glad to have this woman’s song
rhetoric all but set aside;
different, but the same.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2009-03-25 08:11:08]
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Re: Debatable
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:37:58 AM AEST
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| Cool! |
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Re: Debatable
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by elle on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:48:54 AM AEST
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| I agree Yin & Yang everywhere. . . but oh the quiet bliss of a common center of gravity. . . |
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Re: Debatable
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 10:50:58 AM AEST
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like up-quark and down-quark fastened by gluon with nuclear force..this Zeho-Vah, Al-Lah, Yin-Yang..
There was a contradictory reference in Rig-Veda with names..Yama and Yami..they indicate Mater and anti mater..
Veda says that Yama and Yami never make love..since it is against the principle nature.
But I understand that the chines Yin Yang explain the principle of love..which is the basis of life..
I conclude here as I have very limited knowledge about chines texts..
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Re: Debatable
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 03:27:47 PM AEST
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intelligent writing, i enjoyed reading it. good work.
-phil |
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Re: Debatable
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:03:05 PM AEST
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spikers ... March was almost a write off for me and YPDC. I missed so
much splendid work. Yours, among the finest. I have much catching up to do.
This flowed so nicely when read aloud. The beauty of difference, the delight
of similarity. However you slice it, this was delicious. ..and beautifully poetic ~
~ Breezy
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