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Rainbows,clouds and other fluffy things
Contributed by
leopardpie
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Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 06:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rainbows tinted with gold
It’s a beautiful thing to behold
Down in the valley of dreams
Where everything is what it seems
This is your utopia
A place where you are king
And you can fly on a birds wing
Is this what you wanted?
You have lost sight
And slept into the night
You seek to escape
But you won’t wearing a cape
Just awake
And fix your mistake
You have no choice
Because you have a voice
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leopardpie
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2009-03-24 18:01:35]
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Re: Rainbows,clouds and other fluffy things
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by shanat on
Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 06:43:32 PM AEST
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nice work:)
i love all fantasy writing
take care...shanat:) |
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Re: Rainbows,clouds and other fluffy things
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by lnnie on
Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 09:36:08 PM AEST
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Just awake
And fix your mistake
You have no choice
Because you have a voice
Very powerful lines
I have tried to write poems expressing this very thought,
No as good as you did tho
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Re: Rainbows,clouds and other fluffy things
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 05:24:22 PM AEST
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it had a lovely flow to it, great job.
-phil |
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