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In My Eyes...
Contributed by
Silver_Wings
on
Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 02:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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In my eyes you were the greatest; You used to be my hero
In my eyes you did nothing wrong; You made me want to be a better person
In my eyes you were beautiful; You may have been the one for me
In my eyes you were like a rock; I always felt safe when I was in your arms
In my eyes you had it all; I wanted to be just like you once
In my eyes you could've ruled the world; You had so much talent
In my eyes you were my world; I was so innocent and stupid
In my eyes I loved you; I would've done anything for you
In my eyes you never changed; I don't even know you now
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2009-03-23 14:13:50]
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Re: In My Eyes...
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by thewizard on
Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 03:11:06 PM AEST
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| Love can be cruel, and reading your words I can see that love has affected you. You have protrayed what your heart feels and shared it with others - thewizard |
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Re: In My Eyes...
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 07:44:12 AM AEST
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Great write. What you have written here I can relate to as I am sure so many others can too.
I am going through the exact same thing right now with my wife...I know that things have changed between us I am just not that willing to accept the facts. And I dont want to. I love her too much to let her go.
Thank you so much for sharing. Once again you did a great job putting your feeling into words.
Rich |
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