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Waves Collide
Contributed by
jason_robert_britt
on
Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 09:08:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Waves collide with sandy shore;
Moisture seeps into every pore;
Bathe in misty ocean flavour;
Scattering thoughts to the wind.
Seasalt's scent strongly abides;
Gulls, shreiking, circle wide;
Crashing, roaring monster tide;
Moments of eternity ascend.
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2009-03-22 21:08:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Waves Collide
(User Rating: 1 ) by shaynki2 on
Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 10:22:10 AM AEST (User
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i like the imagery used. |
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Re: Waves Collide
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 05:45:43 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem!
I am an ocean lover who is land bound currently.
I miss the ocean so much and with this lovely little poem you have brought my salty love to me!
Thank you so much!
Carol |
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