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Oh, Zooey
Contributed by
onlyafool
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Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 01:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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zooey where do you hide your wings
oh zooey how my heart dings
oh zooey i need to hear you sing
oh zooey i made you a paper ring
oh zooey where do you hide your wings
Oh zooey how you make me feel these things
oh zooey i dont mean to cling
oh zooey how my heart stings
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Re: Oh, Zooey
(User Rating: 1 ) by NaTaChKaH on
Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 08:17:41 PM AEST (User
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The name Zooey is certainly cute. To help you with something precious from inside you is hard to do. As far as structure goes, I'm new at it too. |
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Re: Oh, Zooey
(User Rating: 1 ) by onlyafool on
Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 01:50:35 AM AEST (User
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So, it sucks? |
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