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The Suns Crusade with Monuments Arising
Contributed by
tinathetalkingtaco
on
Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 10:25:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A bright sun gazed upon this needy land.
Needy of all things nourishable
for the massacre had defeated the plenished.
Although it was dimly grim,
the light was extremely distinguished.
Distinguised enough to revive the dead drooping creatures of the darkness.
The sun beat hard against the dark abyss.
Grass had never been more electrifying as this,
along with trees who abolished their saddening reaping.
However, there was only one monument not receiving it's rebirth;
the water was still grieving.
Once as clear as a plain lie,
now became red with blood protruding from the soil.
With light crusading against the Moon's deeds,
there had risen a sharp turn in this revelation.
Now, at the peak of the landscape was the moon,
gasping with respiration.
Melting darkness dripped on the unworthy water, cursing it.
Life rose above it all in hope to reside here forever.
An eternal glory.
The sun stood high as the gray moon had dispersed,
ready to create a compromise.
Fields of gray tranformed themselves to a sepia tone
with the rays of light being shone upon wherever the gracious roam.
What was dead and paralyzed now react with blinding forceful vengeance.
Eternity for the crusade of light and monuments of soulful beings.
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tinathetalkingtaco
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2009-03-22 10:25:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Suns Crusade with Monuments Arising
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 11:41:22 PM AEST (User
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Geeze, talk about graphic imagery!!!! Excellent! while a bit ambiguous to me, yep, definitely dark and enjoyable.
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