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~A kiss to carry with you~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 03:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Melody of rain dancing on the walks
running in currents down cement steps.
The darkness gathering round
and a candle flame dancing on darkened walls
mist and shadows all about
a desert feeling between four walls
and the lost moments of chance
and the wishes of what once was
longing for what could have been
and dreams wash away in the Washington rains
being washed over by pale of blue
melancholy nestles near the heart
and you do not want to give in
yet you do not know where to start.
It follows in the dreams
and blocks out the sun
and then it happens quickly
and fast as it had begun
Someone says something, so easily
teasing the midst of rain
words sweet words penetrating through the brain
and erasing all the angst
and worry from the start
and walks between the lines
and dances near your heart.
A kiss to carry with you wherever you go....
Know your thought of this moment
and when life is hurtful and slow
know that I am your friend
and I shall never leave
I will send it on the air
from a distance you will feel, see
you are never truly alone
even when the world seems amiss
and from this very spot
I shall seal it with a kiss
and you carry it with you wherever you go.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-03-20 15:20:24]
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 08:43:32 PM AEST
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Ha..ha.. my dear friend..your poem is like a sweet kiss that I should carry every where..my dear poetess...
on every day I am being drenched in the ceaseless rain fall of your poetry..Hugs and love:-)venkat |
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, Michelle, simply beautiful!!! |
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by BlueTheWolf on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 02:50:02 AM AEST
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| Real nice :-) |
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 04:11:35 PM AEST
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touching, passionate write. the imagery was great. well done once again.
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 08:09:57 PM AEST
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The context of your poem carries so much meaning. It catches the reader right in the heart and the imagery----oh my the imagery is the vividness of dreams.
"Melody of rain dancing on the walks
running in currents down cement steps."
If their is more encompassing imagery than what is quoted above... I never want to know.
Kie
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Re: ~A kiss to carry with you~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 08:19:02 AM AEST
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breath takingly beautiful. once again you have painted such a wonderful picture with your words. and during a time of need are very much needed. Thank you.
Rich |
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