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We carry on
Contributed by
BlueTheWolf
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 03:01:24 PM in AEST
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So many of us are bleeding,
but we do not drown in our blood
Many of us tremble with fear,
and yet the earth does not shake
So many of us are crying,
but we do not float around lifeless in our tears
Many of us trip and scrape our knee,
but we get up, dust it off, and carry on
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Re: We carry on
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 03:22:48 PM AEST
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Oh my heck so much wisdom in this write and it so so true to the goings on in life and the world as we know it right this moment.
get up dust off and carry on.... yes we have to.
I do know at times though when one gets so beaten down the dusting off and getting up is harder than one can imagine but we must, I must too!
Thanks for this positive and get your butt moving write.
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: We carry on
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 03:44:42 PM AEST
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Nice use of images! This piece makes a lot of sense.
- A |
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Re: We carry on
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 11:27:29 PM AEST
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Yup, we sure do... just need to keep on truckin'. Nice lil poem you got here.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: We carry on
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by Spike on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 02:48:20 AM AEST
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strong imagery, straightforward expression, and a sentiment that we should all exact in our actions and thoughts.
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Re: We carry on
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 04:19:50 PM AEST
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very wise, in so few words. a classic.
-phil |
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Re: We carry on
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:44:51 AM AEST
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| You pack much in just a few lines. Very impressive. |
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