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nothing
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i’m tumbling down a one-way road below the ground
and my soul left me for a dead-end months ago
lately all I seem to be told is try
but all I really want to do is cry
i’m finding it hard because suddenly
i can’t hear or talk or see reality
and nobody can ever fully push away
my sorrow and depression, no matter what they say
today was going to be the day
but you just sat and watched me fade away
i’ll just lie back down and watch as you
cut off my life support machine and drown me
in my sorrow. it’s not my fault,
there’s nothing left to give anymore
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2003-03-25 03:35:00]
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Re: nothing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:25:43 AM AEST
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I hate to think of anyone feeling like this. You certainly aren't pointless becuase I can guarantee you that there are people reading this and thinking "My God! There is someone who knows how I feel." You are not pointless. You are making a difference.
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Re: nothing
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 02:13:54 PM AEST
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Your words touched deep to another time when I felt that way...You have so much to give with your talent...please keep writing and I will keep reading
Sharon |
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Re: nothing
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:21:16 PM AEST
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| i agree with both of the above this is such a strong poem, your strength of feeling is also your strength of being |
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Re: nothing
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:59:09 PM AEST
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(((hugs))) I understand...I hear you :) Its like a darkness that shadows you.But know that in your darkness,you have given someone a glimpse of the light.Merely because you feel...so you write...and in turn someone reads your heart and relates....Know that somewhere in the world,this has been read by someone who is now sighing with great relief.For they don't feel so alone anymore.Please don't feel you are alone either....Im here if you want to talk...smile etc :)
You are NOT pointless...You have much to offer in your own special way....that doesnt have to conform to anyone elses.Be you...be safe...Be happy...(((more hugs))) ;) |
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Re: nothing
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:36:04 AM AEST
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| you are not pointless baby. not now or ever. you have so much to give this world and make it a better place, you are not pointless. love u.xXx |
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Re: nothing
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:33:26 AM AEST
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Oh babe this is so heart rending the last stanza almost put me in tears. Wow u put such emotion and creativity into your poems they all speak to me in a unique way. Hang in there.
Love you,
Joel |
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Re: nothing
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:19:02 PM AEST
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| oh lucie! you have such an amazing poem here, and it is an excellent dark write, i think your talent is so beautiful, you are so beautiful, to read this and see you as you put yourself in the position that you are in this poem, on life support, it is an absolutely vivid and awesome write, i do hope you have a warm smile on your face and a lightness in your heart and soul today though:) ~hugs n' big love nessa |
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