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Eternal Rose
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 11:17:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She has petals as soft as a baby’s breath
And a perfume as sweet as a summer’s breeze
Yet her thorns are a constant reminder not to take her for granted
I hold her thorns within a clinched fist
As I watch the blood drop, falling to the floor
But hate her I cannot for she is forever a part of me and I love her so
So to pluck it out would surely be the death of me
As here I sit and wait, till her sweet perfume once more fills my lungs
And life has meaning and purpose yet again
2009
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2009-03-20 11:17:01]
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Re: Eternal Rose
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 01:34:55 PM AEST
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Rich,
this brought tears to my eyes. I hope that you find the way back to the petals and beauty and not so much of the thorn. Your poetry has always had a special place within my heart and soul, your words always move the reader deeply. I felt your heart my friend.
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Michelle |
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Re: Eternal Rose
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by BlueTheWolf on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 02:40:47 PM AEST
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| Very lovely poem. |
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Re: Eternal Rose
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 09:23:49 PM AEST
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| Oooh.. I feel the pain of separation...venkat |
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Re: Eternal Rose
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:32:05 AM AEST
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I must say I enjoyed this very much. Great style, imagery and thought within this!
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