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Silent Wishes, Silent Dreams
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 11:13:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beading softly as rain upon yonder window
So does sweat as it gently runs upon supple skin
And pure ecstasy draws a thin line between happiness and sorrow
Yet between lovers’ hearts there exists no sin
Building bridges the mind does with its wishes and dreams
Traversing the great void that separates
Love chooses the desperate heart and its worthiness so deems
Until the souls which love does bond enter Heaven’s gates
Wishes and dreams continue to remain silent
For when they are spoken only pain do they bring
But love will not stay speechless as long as the last breath has not been spent
And dawn has yet to break as the nightingale does sing
But if wishes and dreams remain unspoken how can the one you love come to know what you want?
And what is life without the one you love?
2009
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Re: Silent Wishes, Silent Dreams
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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Rich,
again this write showed your soul, beautiful work and the ending questions so solid and so true.
What is life without love and the love we carry within us?
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Silent Wishes, Silent Dreams
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 07:37:45 PM AEST
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You built layers of charming & inquisitive images-wrapped in soulful thoughts.
From your opening thought to your close, I was gently led.
Thank you.
Kie |
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Re: Silent Wishes, Silent Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 12:14:45 AM AEST
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Excellent questions and I sure wish I had the answers. Beautiful writing.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Silent Wishes, Silent Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 03:56:37 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, you are right, love unspoken will never be reality,
hugs n' love nessa |
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