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Dreams
Contributed by
leopardpie
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 09:20:42 AM in AEST
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oops
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When you sleep
And you sink deep
Do you dream
Of being supreme?
Maybe you believe
Or maybe you are naïve
When you see your dreams
Is it all that it seems?
Do you want to never leave
The reality you perceive
Live the life
Where there is no strife.
Let your dreams flow
But you never know
Where you will go
Just remember to say hello
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leopardpie
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2009-03-20 09:20:42]
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 10:38:15 AM AEST
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an enchanting little write, good work.
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Re: Dreams
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by BlueTheWolf on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 03:02:59 AM AEST
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| Why, yes, I'd love to knock myself into a coma. :D I enjoyed your poem. |
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Re: Dreams
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 07:27:23 PM AEST
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An interesting question you've posed to the reader....If only we could dream sleep in a literal sense--controlling the sequence..
Now to dream while woolgathering..Yes, i'd like to stay there!
It is a cute, sweet and delightful poem.
Kie |
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