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Burn Me Once
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Burn me once shame on you
Burn me twice shame on me
How could I be so foolish and trust in you again
To think you'd be there when I needed you
It's amazing how I always help you out
But you never help me
Maybe I shouldn't help you as much
Your always holding me back from greater things
Like a living crutch
Except you're a crooked crutch a twisted thing
You make the problems worse than they seem
You act like you're helping but you always hinder
You've burned me so many times
I am but a cinder
Copyright ©
TundraHydra
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2003-03-25 03:05:00]
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Re: Burn Me Once
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:26:18 AM AEST
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well said. someone who hinders you is no good. i'm glad to see you are aware. best wishes to you.
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Re: Burn Me Once
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:09:46 AM AEST
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the first step to getting out of a relationship that is no good for you is realising that it is no good for you. Well done for taking that step. Great poem. Keep the good work coming!
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Re: Burn Me Once
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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very strong write...it is good to forgive...but you don't have to let them hurt you anymore
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Re: Burn Me Once
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 05:51:17 PM AEST
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| I have a friend just like that...great poem...I loved reading it... |
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