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- Little Man -
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Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 08:04:49 AM in AEST
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It was a happy dream indeed and well,
until her little man awoke not feeling so swell,
his poor little infections
are making him yell...
So off, off and away a doctor is calling,
dont worry though mommy
Imma stop balling,
Ive got your love, and I trust in that,
because your gonna get my medicine and thats a fact...
Back home again
with prescriptions in the bag,
for little mans felling much better
and your ever so glad...
Now watch them shows
that you dearly enjoy the most,
while propping up your feet
sipping your soda, with a toast...
Forever a celebration
as today was a cheer,
your running around is done for now Mommy,
as my infections disappear...
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Re: - Little Man -
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 09:47:26 AM AEST
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lol... cute.
I've known a couple of people that call their son "little man". That's cool. Love the title.
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Re: - Little Man -
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by dark_poet on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 10:02:43 AM AEST
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this was a sweet write, little man has gotten sick.
9/10 for originality |
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Re: - Little Man -
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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Awww this is too cute..just like the little man I'm sure. Glad he's better...
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Re: - Little Man -
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 11:25:59 PM AEST
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That's what I called my son when he was very small.
Good work here.
You preserved a memr'y and give hope for all mummy's.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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