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~Most Prized Possession~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 06:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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~~^~~
The most prized possessions
That I could ever own,
Are the memories that I've collected;
They are mine and mine alone.
No one can ever take from me
The days I spent with friends by the sea.
Or the night I caught my very first fish,
And turned it into a sumptuous dish;
The many times I danced the night away,
Newly found friends that I knew were here to stay;
A smile from a stranger so many years ago,
A dedication from my sister at a Karaoke show;
The wonder of nature, a walk in the rain,
The memory of a lost love and all its pain;
The birth of my nephew, then later with his first toy,
A kiss from my husband when he was just a boy;
But the most precious memory- the one that is the best,
Is the joy I felt the first time I held Celina against my breast.
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2009-03-18 18:20:24]
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by kye on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 06:36:29 PM AEST
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Your poem is incredibly kind, sweet, and filled with precious memories.
It brought tears to my eyes.
Your life has been filled with great memories and I can see how much you treasure each and every one.
Wonderful poem in every sense.
Kie- |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by BlueTheWolf on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 09:55:24 PM AEST
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| Aww, so beautiful. Wonderful poem. |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 10:24:01 PM AEST
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This poem at fist looked like a sumptuous dish..but next it became a precious pearl with lustrous memories..
"A kiss from my husband when he was just a boy" this lovely line made me smile..
This poem is a sweet treasure of your happiest memories!..
The conclusion with little beauty Celina is the most beautiful part and it makes the title meaningful .
Best wishes..with love :-)venkat |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 10:55:32 PM AEST
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Jenni!!! I can just see that huge smile on your face and you conveyed that smile beautifully with this!!! I so loved reading it and you made that smile contagious as it kept getting bigger and bigger as I read this.
Thank you so much for sharing your memories with the rest of us.
Tim |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 10:05:40 AM AEST
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Yeah this is a treasure to be hold jenn
with all it's memories, tugging at the
heart strings . . .
ty likewise 4 your read.
Ben . . . |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 10:31:21 AM AEST
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This poem is so sweet. I can only hope I can have such "prized possessions" as you... only time will tell. Very wonderful heart-felt write. Take Care.
With Love,
~Butterfly |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 08:24:11 PM AEST
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Love it Jenni. such a beautiful conveyance
of love and wonderful memories....Mike |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by Dissolvedlines on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:07:01 PM AEST
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| A beautiful and heartfelt piece. |
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Re: ~Most Prized Possession~
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 2nd June 2009 @ 01:50:16 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem. May there be many more too! |
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