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Birds
Contributed by
bluethewolf
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Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 02:34:46 PM in AEST
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I am waiting for a bird to arrive,
from a branch down low or a branch up high
They make beautiful songs,
I can listen to it all day long
I feed them everyday,
hoping that they would stay
Some times they like it,
some times they don't
Sometimes they'll eat it
sometimes they won't
But I love birds,
animals that have no words
They don't live in houses,
they live in trees
They don't live in honey combs like bumblebees
I've said it before,
I love birds
Animals that have no words
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2009-03-18 14:34:46]
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Re: Birds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 03:42:33 PM AEST
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this is brilliant for an 8 year old, it really is.
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Re: Birds
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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WOW.. I wish I could have written as well at this early age.. I don't think I even thought of writing then...
Well done... Welcome to YPDC...
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Re: Birds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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I love it. Coming from the mind of a child. What an awesome thing.
Thank you for a most enjoyable read.
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Re: Birds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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awww very sweet. You reminded me of the first poem I wrote at about the same age. I still have it.
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