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twelve (perfection)
Contributed by
simsalabim
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Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 12:07:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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five years of your lies
insisting what you don't know
choke on your own foot
Copyright ©
simsalabim
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2009-03-18 00:07:28]
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Re: twelve (perfection)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 02:06:56 PM AEST
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good work.
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Re: twelve (perfection)
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 06:11:45 PM AEST
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very well said. liars will drown in their own words, it's just a matter of time. keep it up with the haiku! take care
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Re: twelve (perfection)
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 11:29:11 PM AEST
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LOL!! the last line made me crack up
but in all serioiusness great write
hope to read more soon
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