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The Lady Moon
Contributed by
Mars
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Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 09:38:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I can't leave, I wish I could.
Bold as to run a sword that stood
And trapped me here, yet free to go
For I so loved her, head to toe.
We've always had our silent dance,
To take a peek, to woo and prance.
A sacred act, we step, in tune.
I loved her still, oh lady moon.
I rose the sun, she drove away.
The endless cycle of a day.
We danced and danced, our bows and spades
Poked holes of light into the haze.
I woke.
A dream.
A stir.
A sigh.
The taste of scarlet lips denied.
I taste the sky, she sees me through.
If I could taste thee, lady moon.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2009-03-17 21:38:06]
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by BlueTheWolf on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:17:13 PM AEST
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| Magical poem :D |
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:54:34 PM AEST
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| Aaah...full of imagination...love song for the moon. Proceed ahead. God bless.-venkat |
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by jessb3 on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 12:26:28 AM AEST
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| This is an absolutely beautiful poem and I really enjoyed reading it. :o) |
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 01:55:43 AM AEST
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Now that is what I'm talking about. Written straight from the flowing heart! Exquisite .
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 02:02:38 PM AEST
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very nice. beautiful writing and imagery.
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by elle on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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this is a treasure. . . your poem reminds me of one of mine "in love with the moon".
thank you. :) elle |
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Re: The Lady Moon
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by Cindy359 on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 05:39:27 PM AEST
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A real good write starts with just words on a piece of paper....then the imagination and magic is what makes it so special. Thanks for sharing this with us...
Cindy |
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