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I'm an outcast
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 03:10:09 PM in AEST
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I'm an outcast
Never to fit in
Me bing social seems like a sin
I'm the last in line
to be on anyones mind
I can't see
what's wrong with me
I'm all alone
I've always been on my own
I'm everyones no one
Never to have a face
Everyone just sees me as a blank space in the human race
I'm an outcast
Never to fit in
Me bing social seems like a sin
I'm the last in line
to be on anyones mind
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-03-17 15:10:09]
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Re: I'm an outcast
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 03:28:04 PM AEST
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i know the feeling. emotive work.
-phil |
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Re: I'm an outcast
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by BlueTheWolf on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 04:38:55 PM AEST
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| Sounds like me. A good read. |
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Re: I'm an outcast
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by Mars on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 09:52:49 PM AEST
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| Yea... I know how it is... but what have they accomplished? I know... I know... it means alot to someone to be told that they are cared for. Just keep hanging on. Be at peace, my friend. =) |
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Re: I'm an outcast
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 06:29:47 PM AEST
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i'm pretty sure everyone feels like an outcast, but we all soon find our way and a place to call home. great write, take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: I'm an outcast
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:16:35 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of when I was in middle school. What I like about this piece is, you have chosen a topic that I think almost anyone can relate to, which is critical in poetry...the written medium that must be EXPERIENCED. Some people can relate because, they actually were outcasts, and others because, everyone felt that way at times. |
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