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Shattered Heart.
Contributed by
hopelezz
on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 07:22:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every-time I think of you,
loneliness passes me through.
Only tears that I've got,
the pain you give and it hurts a lot.
I give anything but you didn't mean,
A broken love that I committed a sin.
I only get a flowing cry,
All my days that I couldn't fly.
Without you I'm feeling sad,
Remembering the days that we were glad.
But now I walk in an empty road,
Without you my world is so dark that has no load.
But now it seems the hardest way,
You say goodbye for only a day.
You broke my heart and leave me apart,
You turn into pieces my begging heart.
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hopelezz
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2009-03-17 07:22:09]
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Re: Shattered Heart.
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by BlueTheWolf on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 07:48:46 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem. |
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Re: Shattered Heart.
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 08:30:57 PM AEST
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| good writing. i love it fro beginning to end.keep on writing. |
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Re: Shattered Heart.
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by Mars on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:03:44 PM AEST
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| It hurts... my friend, it hurts... |
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Re: Shattered Heart.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:11:54 PM AEST
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But now I walk in an empty road......... there is just something about the road.... it fits.
It does hurt for sure. Remember though every path leads you to somewhere else, at times better at times worse but none the less a journey and adventure and a learning experience growing the heart and soul wiser each time.
Hugs
Michelle |
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