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Surrender
Contributed by
ScorpionFire88
on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Each cut gets deeper
Not to my wrist
But to my heart.
Never to my wrist.
Each word
is like a slap
to my face.
I'm trapped.
Each tear
that runs down my cheek,
brings another.
I feel so weak.
Each moment
brings pain
Into my life.
It's all the same.
How much more
Can I stand?
Before I surrender
to the end?
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ScorpionFire88
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2009-03-16 18:22:31]
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Re: Surrender
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:38:27 PM AEST
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Each cut, each word, each tear, each moment..well written. simple but your feelings are well expressed.
Peace.. venkat |
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Re: Surrender
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by PeaceWithinOneLove on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 11:41:18 PM AEST
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| Im right there with you on this one, your words bring great imagery to the poem, good job! |
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Re: Surrender
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 09:15:12 PM AEST
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Even as a teen you was a great writer.
Keep up the awesome writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Surrender
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by tinathetalkingtaco on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 04:54:31 PM AEST
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| wow, that totally is deep. amazing, it's like it comes directly from your heart, well if it's supposed to be from your heart, that is. :) but it's awesome all the same. |
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