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- Hello Amber -
Contributed by
143
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Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 11:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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A rose peddle in bloom
sitting in a sunny day,
thats like your smile
thats like your style,
Or a beautiful snow covered mountain
that sparkles with glee,
Thats like your smile
Id walk a hundred miles to see
Endlessly I say looking through
a box of broken hearts,
Is there anything left
Where are they
Ahhh heres one,
Hello Im Chad,
Hello Im Amber,
Hello Amber, Im all smiles now
So Amber, Theres a ton of beauty I see
Like Rose Peddles,
And snow covered mountains,
As the sun glistens its sparkles,
And thats like your smile....
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2009-03-15 23:43:32]
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Re: - Hello Amber -
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 11:54:07 PM AEST
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That has to be one beautiful smiles as this is an awesome write.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: - Hello Amber -
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 03:09:24 AM AEST
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Simple and sweet hello..
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Re: - Hello Amber -
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 07:33:47 AM AEST
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cracking write! its so simple, and yet so deep. so many images and emotions, compressed into so few words. splendid!
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