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My Promise
Contributed by
ScorpionFire88
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Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 04:57:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I've been ungrateful
I've acted insane
now I look back
And feel ashamed.
I took your love for granted
and yet you still forgave me,
I'll make it up to you
Just wait and see.
This is my promise
to make things right
and turn our dimming relationship
into something bright.
You have always been there
through the hardships and trials
in the end
you always made me smile.
This is my promise
to my mother
she is a great person
and I really do love her.
Copyright ©
ScorpionFire88
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2009-03-15 16:57:14]
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Re: My Promise
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 06:16:40 PM AEST
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This is beautifull and any mom would luv it.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: My Promise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 08:20:10 PM AEST
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deep, great writing.
-phil |
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Re: My Promise
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by tswilkins on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 04:11:20 PM AEST
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| I believe mothers would appreciate this. Mine would. Such a pleasant read. Thank you for sharing! |
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Re: My Promise
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by 12161216 on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:26:07 PM AEST
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| Wonderful, I can relate :D |
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