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my angel, my devil
Contributed by
becksull
on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 10:29:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My angel, my devil,
my body, my soul,
one touch of your lips,
i lose all control
your soft lips so sexy,
your body so warm,
you must be an angel,
that took human form
you took human form,
then you took something else,
you've stolen my heart,
like nobody else,
cos nobody else,
ever touched it so sweetly,
im falling in love,
im falling completely
-becksull
xx
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Re: my angel, my devil
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:07:56 PM AEST
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| I love it! Very sweet and Oh-So-True. |
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Re: my angel, my devil
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:43:21 PM AEST
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This is refreshing like the rain on a spring day.
Nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: my angel, my devil
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 08:56:56 PM AEST
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This was good stuff,
I loved this write.
Of course i'm a hopeless romantic also.
~Bin~
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Re: my angel, my devil
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 10:59:10 AM AEST
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It is one thing to write about love &
another to write when you're in love.
The feelings really shines through. |
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