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Longing for days that have already been played
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 03:45:13 AM in AEST
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symptoms of tomorrows non-existence
sparrows running amuck in the fields that were called home
singing empty songs of yesterdays past
We play this field song like tribal drums in the mist
swallowing everything but the dust
sensing tomorrows dream but feeling the empty sense of it all
songs of yesteryear playing on the top forty
wanting dance and the sense of jive
staying is the best of this worse condition
slumber in the mist we call fate
wallow with the pigs but do not get slaughtered
those pearls will not get stuck in those throats
we all whimper on the aftertaste
Forget the taste and follow along
seeking the gold that we can all drive on
longing for mansions and the coolest faze
wondering tomorrow if we can handle the haze
dancing with demons and the way of the west
not the six guns but the pimped out cool vests
sipping the song that will never play
longing for days that have already been played
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Re: Longing for days that have already been played
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 08:51:39 AM AEST
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beautiful. the imagery was great and it was written well. great work.
-phil |
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Re: Longing for days that have already been played
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by simsalabim on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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i like porn also...and lil jon...
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Re: Longing for days that have already been played
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 01:22:21 AM AEST
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wwo my friend,
don't know what brought this on but ya gotta feel better. This is some very powerful writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Longing for days that have already been played
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:26:59 PM AEST
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| I love the writing. Very deep and full of SOOO much power. |
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