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One Four And More
Contributed by
dirbax
on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 04:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Here I am to start what I came for
Telling my story from one to four
One goal I have lived my whole life for
Searching for luxury , richness and more
Two decades , twenty years of war
Keeping try knocking the door
Three months ago I was at the store
Bying some things I came for
Four people with weapons , they smell gore
Trying to take the moneybox , they want more
One bullet out with a big bore
Flying on aire , touched my core
Two heart surgeries , so sore
Being alone in room , I tore
Three things I know so for
Being alive , healthy and safe is all
Four times you think and more
We all have better than what we look for
Author : Mr Dirbaxer
Copyright ©
dirbax
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2009-03-10 16:31:42]
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Re: One Four And More
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 05:09:37 PM AEST
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| This poem has good flow to it. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: One Four And More
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 08:49:10 AM AEST
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nice work, very sincere and deep.
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