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MY FIRST THOUGHT
Contributed by
joe-joe
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Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 04:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My first thought,
With the morning light,
My last thought,
As I close my eyes for the night,
The dream that I dream,
Upon the desire of my pillow,
A true vision of joy,
As I stand under the weeping willow-
Your beauty,
Transcends the height of the mountain so high,
Wiping away every tear that I might cry,
For your laughter,
Fills my soul with joy, peace, and serenity,
Rendering me helpless under the gaze of your eyes,
Which are filled with love, peace, and amity-
In harmony, therefore, we shall forever live,
Alive with hope and goodwill,
Walking in accordance with God’s holy and precious will-
Copyright ©
joe-joe
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2009-03-10 16:26:02]
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Re: MY FIRST THOUGHT
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by Butterflyperfect on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 08:36:53 PM AEST
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This is soooo sweet. I really liked your descriptions... it put pictures in my head.
A very enjoyable read.
Great Job!
With Love,
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Re: MY FIRST THOUGHT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 08:44:59 AM AEST
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a lovely write, thoughtful and beautiful.
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