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the stars
Contributed by
shanat
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Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 05:59:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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We sailed from the stars
only thinking of ancient speech
to protect us from ancient scars
from this day we will shine
like we are supposed to be
like a mourning cello
who is also shouting with glee
not tired of brightness
just only thinking of kindness
look up at us and see
that you too will join with me:)
Copyright ©
shanat
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2009-03-10 05:59:09]
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Re: the stars
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 09:38:40 AM AEST
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Wow..its really cute..makes me smile..
glad that you shared it .:-)venkat |
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Re: the stars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 11:48:31 AM AEST
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nice writing, a lovely read.
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Re: the stars
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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I love the stars and this poem is pretty, nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: the stars
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 12:20:45 AM AEST
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Welcome, welcome, to our global family here at ypdc.
This is incredibly beautyful, very powerfull write.
i read the one you just posted and had to come read um all.
I luv yo style.
keep up the great work.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: the stars
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by lnnie on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 07:15:43 PM AEST
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Thanks for you comment on the Star poem.
I have just read yours. Wonderful style. It really flows
and the emotion comes through, Always the emotions.
Poems sail only on the emotional seas.
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