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The Spirit of Quintessence
Contributed by
kye
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Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 03:42:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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On a bed of past fall autumn’s
Invisible puppet strings
Lift up my eyes
As leaves swirl upward
To skies held barren
From lofty clouds
Gnarled branches reach down
Bending arthritic knuckles
To snap my wayward thoughts
Tattooed from seasons
Wavy and distended
As they flirt with the sun
Animating noble personality
The spirit of quintessence
Guardian of daydreamers
And thus I dream in glimpses
Of youthful laughter
Photographed by summer
Illustrated by the wind
Enflamed by Karma
Copyright ©
kye
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2009-03-08 15:42:09]
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 03:49:05 PM AEST
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very beautiful writing.
-phil |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 04:30:22 PM AEST
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Kie,
You soooo under rate yourself that I am about to shake a stern finger at you.
This is not only amazingly beautiful with thoughtful imagery, it is deep and thought provoking.
Wow, I am very impressed.
Thank you ever so much for a thoroughly enoyable read.
Mr. Timotheus |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by venkat on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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arthritic knuckles, flirt with the sun,spirit of quintessence,dream in glimpses of youthful laughter...Ooh..
Excellent epithets..you have not only photographed the nature but also looked into its inner pshyche..
You have not only shown the spirit of mother nature but also enabled us to embrace her by your poem..
here you have become a flame of consciousness.. and while reading this I felt I was an ageless Tree..
God bless love and happiness to you..
venkat
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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Your poems always paint such a beautiful picture with such vivid imagery. Your style is so eloquent; and there is such depth to your writes. It comes alive and so to experience it is like being there. Wonderful poem, Thanks for sharing.
Jenni |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 10:57:25 PM AEST
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Gosh, I have missed your writing, I am so glad you came back.
There;s just something about the way you describe things that is so wonderful. I forgot how speechless it makes me.
Welcome back :D
Phil xxx |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 02:57:47 AM AEST
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Dynamic write.
What cha been up to?
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by elle on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:42:54 PM AEST
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| Indeed!!! Smiles. . . elle |
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Re: The Spirit of Quintessence
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by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 05:29:13 PM AEST
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your words
swirl upwards.
becoming the envy of the leaves
themselves.
( lovely work ! ) |
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