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Broken My soul
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 01:54:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My wings are clipped
I'm stranded here, inside a quicksand of pain
Slowly sinking to nothingness
I wasn't happy when I left
I'm not happy now that I'm back
There's no happiness left in my life
I feel empty, yet weighted down with sadness
My soul is broken
My mind, my sanity is shattered
Agony, deep, cutting solitude
My heart is hollowed out
The suffocating depression nearly too much to bear
No joy, no love
Unappriciated, unwanted, unloved
Empty
A burden to society
The world would be better off without me
There's no place for someone like me
God takes away my joy
Then he takes away my friend
And after he takes my cat's life
What did I do, honestly?
Why is some happiness too much to ask for?
I try so hard, I fight my best
I'm trying to live life but so many things
Are ruined, are taken away
Hopeless, empty, tired
I'm so tired of trying
I just want to end it
The pain, the hellish nightmare I live
Abandoned, hated, alone
I feel like nothing, like I'm pointless
Like all I do is ruin life for those around me
Broken, hollow, alone
I'm so tired
Why does my life have to be
Such a living nightmare
I'm broken
A doll, shattered and empty
A shadow on the wall
Good for nothing
Yet still there
I work so hard
Trying to please them all
I'm not helpful, not needed
Please take me away
From all of this pain
Just let me die
Please
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2009-03-08 01:54:09]
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Re: Broken My soul
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by -Sinner- on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 12:25:19 PM AEST
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First off I just want to say wow. I know exactly what you are going through. Everything you wrote is very much how I feel right now.
I loved your poem, it really screams out that you are in pain. That you need something to believe in, that you have lost your hope. I know I am just a stranger, but hold on. Life is worth living. I have been to that dark place where you don't want to keep going on. But life is far more beautiful then most people see. Just hold on, this is a low point. But this will pass, you just need to find strength in yourself and the people around you. I know you feel alone but reach out, tell people how you feel.
I lost my best friend alittle over a year ago, I know the pain of loss. To have a part of you just ripped away, never to have that support again. Never to hear that persons voice again. They are always with you though, in your heart.
Be strong and hold on. Time heals all wounds. |
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Re: Broken My soul
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by skywings on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 06:02:51 AM AEST
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| Angry, frustrated, alone, hopeless, helpless. Most people have felt this before. I like how you go through different emotions throughout the poem; pain, sadness, loneliness, anger... finally ending in tiredness and just wanting everything to stop. Well done. I hope things look up for you. :) |
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