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Resin Heart
Contributed by
recyclebin
on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 11:02:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I’m stuck in glue
I move,
But attached,
Unable to break free from you.
The words you say,
Stick to me,
Deaf ears,
My soul pasted to keep you away.
Your coldness,
Has adhesive to my heart
The compound has bonded,
And drove me apart.
You have,
Harden me with your resin,
That bleeds from your pores.
I break this,
Unnatural chemical bond,
By shutting down, I cry out, for
I’m broken.
My resin heart,
Once porcelain… now shattered pieces of art.
I cannot even bleed
The pores that once flowed,
now clogged of your deed.
Copyright ©
recyclebin
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2009-03-07 23:02:31]
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Re: Resin Heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 01:04:12 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
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Re: Resin Heart
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 01:57:25 AM AEST
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This had me right inside its depth, awesome work here.
I break this unnatural chemical bond..... deep!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Resin Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 03:04:28 AM AEST
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Holy censored, Bin. This is some damn cool stuff. How unqiue. You had me thinking of a caulk gun and thinking of some ******* ***** all at the same time. You really dished it out with some power in this one.
woo!!!
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Re: Resin Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 03:59:05 PM AEST
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i know this feeling, you described it perfectly:
'Your coldness,
Has adhesive to my heart
The compound has bonded,
And drove me apart.
You have,
Harden me with your resin,'
that is precisely what it is like, i couldn't have put it better myself. great work.
-phil |
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Re: Resin Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 04:27:05 PM AEST
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Whoa! That was awesome!! I relate to this so much. The metaphor
you used couldn't be more profoundly true. Your ability to not only
relay an emotion to your readers, but actually make them feel
it is outstanding.
Your words fashion a sympathetic reservoir from which the reader
drinks, but is never completely sated. This is what makes a poem last,
methinks. The eternal wish to empathize and feel what the poem relays.
Exceptional work!
~ Breezy
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