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Goodbye Lady Road
Contributed by
shelby
on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 02:58:21 AM in AEST
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oops
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There is no rumble of the engine, Red Bonnet is not here.
The sounds of the city noise is now what ears hear.
Adjustment and no truck stop in the view, no big truck rumbles
Good bye miss Lady Road you are fading into darkness.
She is becoming a ghost, tip the cup another toast.
No more black ribbon to fade into sunsets of another time.
Now blank expressions and a fog inside the mind.
Looking around still strangers faces to find.
Reminding her of an old clock trying to wind it down.
Look around, pave a new way try and forget whats left behind.
Another road, another highway, another trip now put away.
Fade away another day goodbye Ms lady Road tis true.......
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shelby
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2009-03-07 02:58:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Goodbye Lady Road
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 03:16:41 AM AEST (User
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Michele, I am not quite sure I completely understand this but it sure took me to a place as if I was traveling with you two. That was a nice "ride along". Thank you....really... thank you.
Tim
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Re: Goodbye Lady Road
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 12:05:17 PM AEST (User
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Surely you guys aren't packing it in yet are you?
I sense an acute sadness and a longing of the worst kind. Is it goodbye to her
forever? Or just a while .... in any case, the piece is JAMPACKED with emotion, hun.
as always, you write from the heart.
*huge hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: Goodbye Lady Road
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 12:12:17 AM AEST (User
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Sad but well written.
hang tuff, my dear, dear, friend.
Huggs, luv, blessings, peace, joy,
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Re: Goodbye Lady Road
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 09:48:35 PM AEST (User
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Very sad but tomorrow brings a new day.
Very visual write. |
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