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Some One Called You . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 09:06:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Some leave there hearts
inside of a song
some act it out in a
play,
mine merely waited
'till you came along
hoping you'd steal it
away.
How
a love happens
i really don't know
impossible
yet to deny,
when you consider
how i love you so
proves that a heart can't
lie.
Some
store there hearts
in a warm memory
reminisent of days
gone
by,
we simply left it to
destiny
what was already
you and
i
Some
choose to wear
their heart on a sleeve
so all of the world can
see,
i'd rather wear yours
inside of me 'till the death
of
eternity.
Then
what does it matter
when love is true
where a heart
goes looking to stay,
all this one needed
was some one called you
to never again look
away.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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Re: Some One Called You . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 10:18:35 PM AEST
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Ben, you consistently have some of the best love poems. I really like all these lines but this one... How a love happens i really don't know really reached out and grabbed my cranium. It provokes thoughts in me but mainly the thought, yeah, best not to question it. Oh and perhaps it's a miracle. You two have something great that I wish we could all have. I am glad that you decide to share that part of your wonderful life with the rest of us.
Take care and blessings to you.
Tim
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Re: Some One Called You . . . Ben
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 11:50:25 PM AEST
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Step by step I melt down and flow like a sream of love..what a nice flow of feeling..
God Bless, I am only to repeat the comments of Tim. venkat |
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Re: Some One Called You . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 04:11:52 AM AEST
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Ben,
I still say you need to reach Hallmark. Dang this is so beautiful. Thanks for reminding me of moments soft and tender, this needs spread around in the world today. The truth of heart and soul,
huggles from ur puggles
Michelle |
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Re: Some One Called You . . . Ben
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by ATG on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 11:33:11 AM AEST
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Wow!! I am impressed, an impressive piece indeed.
Im going to be looking at your other poems.
"Some store there heartsin a warm memory reminisent of days gone by,
we simply left it to destinywhat was already
you and I" This one pulled at the hearts string so to speak.
Peace... keep up the good stuff :P...
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