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Flower
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 01:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wither with age
I grow with the sun
I drink water
Life has begun
I try to stay pretty
and grow up tall
But as I age
I eventually fall
My petals are red
The blood of my heart
Racing through my veins
And setting me apart
Everyone else
Looks healthy and good
As I wither and bend
But I knew I would
Then my color fades
Now I'm black and dry
No rain can save me
No reason to try
My time has come
It's time to die
I was beautiful once
Now just let my spirit fly
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butterflyperfect
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2009-03-06 13:36:44]
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Re: Flower
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by Crookedpoet09 on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 02:12:56 PM AEST
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| The poem flowed nicely off my tongue, good stuff, keep it up my brother. |
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Re: Flower
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST
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lovely work, it was an inciteful, interesting write.
with love,
phil |
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Re: Flower
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by Recyclebin on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:04:52 PM AEST
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Very nice... The beauty will forever be in my eye ... :o)
Liked this one a lot.
~BiN~ |
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Re: Flower
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:16:51 PM AEST
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I really like the metaphor all throughout. This is also very spiritual and has a nice touch of wisdom.
Loved it.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Flower
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 08:54:48 PM AEST
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| very nice work .. absolutely beautiful.:-)venkat |
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