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I carry your love
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 01:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Maybe you are the lucky one, sweet uncle of mine.
A journey on the paths of this cruel world have ended the time.
I miss you, the sweet man that held so much love.
I shall carry your love with me, and hope you watch over from above.
My words and thoughts all tangled up, living in my world of blue.
I wish I could come to say goodbye, there is nothing I can do.
So here where I sit and think of you, and the kindness in your heart.
Another good man now gone from my life, it pains and stings that we now part.
I wish you well on the new journey, and I carry your love near me close.
Washington rains fall once more, a constant rain in my soul.
I think of you and I miss you, I know now you are at rest.
Another star angel to watch over from heaven, my dear uncle you were always the best.
The note to this poem is a bit tacky, my writing is losing its way.
But I know that you know what I mean, and the thoughts I try to convey.
So I carry your love with me, and try to hold it close,
lost in a flurry of life, it is you that I love the most.
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shelby
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2009-03-06 13:00:54]
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Re: I carry your love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:06:14 PM AEST
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Michelle, I am very sorry to hear about your loss but you said something that to me is very thought provoking. You say maybe he is the lucky one. I quite often wonder if our time here is like some sort of sentence.
Anyway, I am sure he will love this and hold it dear no matter where he is at. It is, after all, a beautiful eulogy.
Take care and blessings to you.
Tim |
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Re: I carry your love
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 07:20:39 PM AEST
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Oh Hun, I am so sorry for your loss.... This is a wonderful tribute to your uncle. I am sure he is looking down with pride... Keep in alive in your heart....
Hugs
Jen |
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Re: I carry your love
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 09:03:36 PM AEST
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Dear Michelle..
I am extremely sorry for your loss..
..My thoughts are with you..
This is a nice tribute to a beloved noble soul..
Big hugs..God bless. venkat |
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